Terrible Accident
The young Ally Crowder had a bad day at the Olympics. She was doing great in her program, with no mess up or mistakess. She was in the lead.
Then it came time for her to do a triple axel. She did all three revolutions in the air, but when it came time for her to come down to land on her foot, she twisted her ankel, fell, and then she hit the side of the wall.
It took her coach about ten minutes to wake her back up. She then was sent to the Garden city Hospital. The doctor told Ally that she would have to quit skating for three weeks and come back in for a check up before she begans to skate again.
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ReplyDeleteIn the main article you need to indent paragraphs or double space between. I see it as having three paragraphs.
In the "dress" ad the word 'inn' should only have one n.